<p>写词吧，这种律诗很难表达，建议词牌西江月或者浣溪沙</p>

<p>闲来无事，想起过往之事，真tm历历在目，大家看我id就知道了。瞎几把写了点东西，我把这一段摘出来，求jr们批评指正，我就想表达我tm想女人但是一直莫得的那种巨难受的情感。照着五言绝句的格律编的，不喜轻喷🐶</p><p></p><p>吾尝自以为长卿，欲觅文君。然徘徊数载，倍尝艰辛，皆无所获，无奈唯有立踯躅而长叹：“梦里佳人俏，明眸竟泛涛。玉肩何处倚？绿蚁漫心梢。”</p><p></p><p>福利就随便上几张壁纸吧</p><p></p><div><center class="hupu-img" data-h="545"data-w="555" data-origin="https://i4.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_42172_o_w_555_h_545_34646.jpg?x-oss-process=image/format,png"  data_url="https://i4.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_42172_o_w_555_h_545_34646.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_1000/format,png"  src="https://i4.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_42172_o_w_555_h_545_34646.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_600/format,jpg/quality,Q_60" data-imgid="df922f6caeee305e2dc61dc3ae522176"   ></center></div><p></p><div><center class="hupu-img" data-h="1000"data-w="1336" data-origin="https://i11.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_254349_o_w_1336_h_1000_20875.jpeg?x-oss-process=image/format,png"  data_url="https://i11.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_254349_o_w_1336_h_1000_20875.jpeg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_1000/format,png"  src="https://i11.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_254349_o_w_1336_h_1000_20875.jpeg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_600/format,jpg/quality,Q_60" data-imgid="03275df775eab8f4c8d26419c702dc7d"   ></center></div><p></p><div><center class="hupu-img" data-h="1872"data-w="864" data-origin="https://i10.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_139591_o_w_864_h_1872_19168.jpg?x-oss-process=image/format,png"  data_url="https://i10.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_139591_o_w_864_h_1872_19168.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_1000/format,png"  src="https://i10.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_139591_o_w_864_h_1872_19168.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_600/format,jpg/quality,Q_60" data-imgid="15d67b39690a4610375446093a3477ea"   ></center></div><p></p><div><center class="hupu-img" data-h="3613"data-w="1440" data-origin="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_223558_o_w_1440_h_3613_20282.jpg?x-oss-process=image/format,png"  data_url="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_223558_o_w_1440_h_3613_20282.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_1000/format,png"  src="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_223558_o_w_1440_h_3613_20282.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_600/format,jpg/quality,Q_60" data-imgid="1db2a34c66b7132e08ee90c403219238"   ></center></div><p></p><div><center class="hupu-img" data-h="2778"data-w="1411" data-origin="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_199268_o_w_1411_h_2778_13254.jpg?x-oss-process=image/format,png"  data_url="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_199268_o_w_1411_h_2778_13254.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_1000/format,png"  src="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_199268_o_w_1411_h_2778_13254.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_600/format,jpg/quality,Q_60" data-imgid="aae9444ce28a1ce62f4382ee470218ea"   ></center></div><p></p><div><center class="hupu-img" data-h="1787"data-w="800" data-origin="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_200544_o_w_800_h_1787_1410.jpg?x-oss-process=image/format,png"  data_url="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_200544_o_w_800_h_1787_1410.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_1000/format,png"  src="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_200544_o_w_800_h_1787_1410.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_600/format,jpg/quality,Q_60" data-imgid="51661c964db69d143c7d29cdf17a6d96"   ></center></div><p></p><div><center class="hupu-img" data-h="2400"data-w="690" data-origin="https://i4.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_269391_o_w_690_h_2400_7126.jpg?x-oss-process=image/format,png"  data_url="https://i4.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_269391_o_w_690_h_2400_7126.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_1000/format,png"  src="https://i4.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_269391_o_w_690_h_2400_7126.jpg?x-oss-process=image/resize,w_600/format,jpg/quality,Q_60" data-imgid="7ed98d80df3007a540b392e9e2949ebc"   ></center></div><p></p>

闲来无事，想起过往之事，真tm历历在目，大家看我id就知道了。瞎几把写了点东西，

jr们看看这瞎B写的诗能咋改进啊？

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<p>闲来无事，想起过往之事，真tm历历在目，大家看我id就知道了。瞎几把写了点东西，我把这一段摘出来，求jr们批评指正，我就想表达我tm想女人但是一直莫得的那种巨难受的情感。照着五言绝句的格律编的，不喜轻喷🐶</p><p></p><p>吾尝自以为长卿，欲觅文君。然徘徊数载，倍尝艰辛，皆无所获，无奈唯有立踯躅而长叹：“梦里佳人俏，明眸竟泛涛。玉肩何处倚？绿蚁漫心梢。”</p><p></p><p>福利就随便上几张壁纸吧</p><p></p><p><img src="https://i4.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_42172_o_w_555_h_545_34646.jpg" data-h="545" data-w="555" data-imgid="df922f6caeee305e2dc61dc3ae522176"/></p><p></p><p><img src="https://i11.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_254349_o_w_1336_h_1000_20875.jpeg" data-h="1000" data-w="1336" data-imgid="03275df775eab8f4c8d26419c702dc7d"/></p><p></p><p><img src="https://i10.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_139591_o_w_864_h_1872_19168.jpg" data-h="1872" data-w="864" data-imgid="15d67b39690a4610375446093a3477ea"/></p><p></p><p><img src="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_223558_o_w_1440_h_3613_20282.jpg" data-h="3613" data-w="1440" data-imgid="1db2a34c66b7132e08ee90c403219238"/></p><p></p><p><img src="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_199268_o_w_1411_h_2778_13254.jpg" data-h="2778" data-w="1411" data-imgid="aae9444ce28a1ce62f4382ee470218ea"/></p><p></p><p><img src="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_200544_o_w_800_h_1787_1410.jpg" data-h="1787" data-w="800" data-imgid="51661c964db69d143c7d29cdf17a6d96"/></p><p></p><p><img src="https://i4.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/110/42029110/thread_42029110_20200113121158_s_269391_o_w_690_h_2400_7126.jpg" data-h="2400" data-w="690" data-imgid="7ed98d80df3007a540b392e9e2949ebc"/></p><p></p>

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