<p>字不敢评价，但是开头就有错别字</p>

<p>“余”，尽管评，免得你心里不痛快，何必藏着掖着呢</p>

<p>你说的对的评价，我必须是欣然接受的</p>

<p>结构有些难看的，但更多的问题是用笔不松，看你的字应该是科班出身的，哪位老师的学生</p>

<p>用笔的确发紧，结构难看有些不能接受，哈哈，没有老师，都是自学~</p>

<p>别光说不练，发点字上来看看呗</p>

<p>自学为什么会写成这个面貌，楷书。我知道有几个美院的老师喜欢这样写</p>

<p>自学为什么不能写成这个面貌呢？</p>

<p><img src="https://i1.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/496/30105496/thread_30105496_20200704144801_s_589501_w_808_h_2001_37256.jpg"/></p><p><img src="https://i2.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/496/30105496/thread_30105496_20200704144801_s_257126_w_640_h_1631_41148.jpg"/></p><p><img src="https://i2.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/496/30105496/thread_30105496_20200704144801_s_613219_w_1080_h_1440_81090.jpg"/></p><p><img src="https://i2.hoopchina.com.cn/hupuapp/bbs/496/30105496/thread_30105496_20200704144801_s_235984_w_460_h_2200_10244.jpg"/></p><p>现在手上没图了，清了手机</p>

<p>不知道算不算习气，然后就是墨气太重，拙见</p>

<p>你指墨太重吗？那幅6尺楷书，肉了？</p>

<p>我觉得一福字下来最重要的是气息，通篇有点黑压压的了，不透气。然后就是虽然写的很茂密，但是气不贯，有点显得支离。我不知道兄平时写字是什么状态，但是出来的感觉是不放松的</p>

<p>篆隶我不懂，第一个有些不灵动，呆板了些；可能是生宣原因，力道略有不足~</p>

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